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davoldo · 02-04-2008, 05:16 PM

Hy guys !!
I've just put one of my CG short movies on Youtube, and I'd like to know what you think about it. I took me about 18 months of lonely hard work, it's in french, but with english subtitles. Don't hesitate to criticize !
hope you'll like it !!

1st part
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rG6gVcHR7lg
2nd part
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IJNpEzJbVB4

simovici · 03-12-2008, 04:08 AM

Wow, the story is awesome especially the way you expressed her emotions. +5 stars from me.
Those 18 months worth it.

Even there could be some observations regarding the textures or the animation, I believe it doesn't even matter as long everything was focused on the action.

Keep it up.

Bobb · 03-12-2008, 12:35 PM

Very well done - I have nothing but admiration for anyone who can focus for 18 months! I thought it was very atmospheric, and the pacing's just right.

The only thing I found slightly jarring is when she stands up from the bed (about 3 minutes in) as the weight seems wrong. I think she either needs to push her upper body further forward or pull her feet back under her.

But in general I agree with Simovici - you keep the viewers' interest throughout the whole thing and that's hugely important.

Bobb · 03-12-2008, 12:36 PM

Very well done - I have nothing but admiration for anyone who can focus for 18 months! I thought it was very atmospheric, and the pacing is just right.

The only thing I found slightly jarring is when she stands up from the bed (about 3 minutes in) as the weight seems wrong. I think she either needs to push her upper body further forward or pull her feet back under her.

But in general I agree with Simovici - you keep the viewers' interest throughout the whole thing and that's hugely important.

*minimus* · 03-12-2008, 01:56 PM

really good. i agree. 18 month of focus, thats respect. how long did it take to render it all?

davoldo · 03-12-2008, 04:30 PM

Thank you guys !!
I'm very glad you all said that this short movie manages to keep your attention to the end of it !! That's exactly what I wanted to do !!
thank you !!!!!

leeper2020 · 03-19-2008, 09:33 AM

Very, Very, Cool. Great suspense/triller story. Hopefully will see some full length movies from you!

Chanf · 04-18-2008, 03:11 AM

really cool... i can feel the emotion behind the scene n character...

02-04-2008, 05:16 PM	#1 (permalink)
davoldo Registered User Join Date: Feb 2008 Age: 26 Posts: 2 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Rep Power: 0	CG short movie 'The Butterflies' Hy guys !! I've just put one of my CG short movies on Youtube, and I'd like to know what you think about it. I took me about 18 months of lonely hard work, it's in french, but with english subtitles. Don't hesitate to criticize ! hope you'll like it !! 1st part http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rG6gVcHR7lg 2nd part http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IJNpEzJbVB4

03-12-2008, 04:08 AM	#2 (permalink)
simovici 3d artist and dreamer Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: Romania Age: 27 Posts: 6 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Rep Power: 0	Wow, the story is awesome especially the way you expressed her emotions. +5 stars from me. Those 18 months worth it. Even there could be some observations regarding the textures or the animation, I believe it doesn't even matter as long everything was focused on the action. Keep it up. __________________ "Dandelion" - Personal animation project WIP (2008) My website (animations, stills, free : tutorials, textures, shaders)

03-12-2008, 01:56 PM	#5 (permalink)
minimus SkoleSlasken Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Norway (Trondheim) Age: 18 Posts: 2,242 Blog Entries: 4 Thanks: 10 Thanked 24 Times in 23 Posts Rep Power: 6 Awards Showcase Total Awards: 11	really good. i agree. 18 month of focus, thats respect. how long did it take to render it all? __________________ Det som ikke dreper deg gjør deg stærkere :thumbsup: Norge

03-19-2008, 09:33 AM	#7 (permalink)
leeper2020 Leeper2020 Join Date: Mar 2008 Age: 27 Posts: 1 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Rep Power: 0	The Butterflies Very, Very, Cool. Great suspense/triller story. Hopefully will see some full length movies from you!

03-12-2008, 12:35 PM	#3 (permalink)
Bobb Registered User Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: England, London Posts: 9 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Rep Power: 0	Very well done - I have nothing but admiration for anyone who can focus for 18 months! I thought it was very atmospheric, and the pacing's just right. The only thing I found slightly jarring is when she stands up from the bed (about 3 minutes in) as the weight seems wrong. I think she either needs to push her upper body further forward or pull her feet back under her. But in general I agree with Simovici - you keep the viewers' interest throughout the whole thing and that's hugely important.

03-12-2008, 12:36 PM	#4 (permalink)
Bobb Registered User Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: England, London Posts: 9 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Rep Power: 0	Very well done - I have nothing but admiration for anyone who can focus for 18 months! I thought it was very atmospheric, and the pacing is just right. The only thing I found slightly jarring is when she stands up from the bed (about 3 minutes in) as the weight seems wrong. I think she either needs to push her upper body further forward or pull her feet back under her. But in general I agree with Simovici - you keep the viewers' interest throughout the whole thing and that's hugely important.

03-12-2008, 04:30 PM	#6 (permalink)
davoldo Registered User Join Date: Feb 2008 Age: 26 Posts: 2 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Rep Power: 0	Thank you guys !! I'm very glad you all said that this short movie manages to keep your attention to the end of it !! That's exactly what I wanted to do !! thank you !!!!!

04-18-2008, 03:11 AM	#8 (permalink)
Chanf Registered User Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: Jakarta Age: 26 Posts: 10 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Rep Power: 0	really cool... i can feel the emotion behind the scene n character...

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