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Old 12-09-2008, 01:55 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Swan

Hi people. This is my first WIP human model I put on a forum. Swan is a girl whom one day, I hope, I'll animate. That's why I welcome C&C regarding the mesh as well as ideas and tips for making the edge loops more optimal for animation.


Simple Fast SSS Skin material and default light


Wireframe screenshot

Thanks in advance.
PS: Yea, the big eyes and the ear's simplicity are not accidental :)
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Old 12-09-2008, 03:37 PM   #2 (permalink)
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looks good. im interesting in watching this progress. thanks. sorry i can give no help as i am a beginner. i will only be able to complement.
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Old 12-09-2008, 03:45 PM   #3 (permalink)
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as far as mesh goes it looks pretty good to me. ive only done a couple of heads so i dont no alot but i do no some and the mesh is pretty clean from what i can see. just make sure u keep everything in quads as much as u can. quads = great triangles = passable 5+ sides = not good

mabye bring out the nostrols just a little, idk (just my personal taste)
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Old 12-10-2008, 03:39 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Hi Dracula! Nice aliens :)
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