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Old 03-04-2007, 03:53 PM   #1 (permalink)
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hi, here is my first human project

this is gonna be one of my character for a short animatin im working now

is a replic of v rossi (caricature)

is low poly so will never be perfect , maybe i will put a little tatoo or something
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The mid section and shoulders could use a little work. Other than that, nice start.
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You might want to render it out in orthographic views (front, side,etc) for judgement purpose. It's difficult to analyse the proportions of the model from perspective view. Be careful on his elbow area, our elbows isn't that narrow there. And it appear that his forearms are too long in proportion compared to his upperarms.

Good effort though, keep goin :)
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