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Old 02-19-2007, 11:30 PM   #1 (permalink)
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I just started woeking on this model. So far I have the torso legs and arms. I'll model the hands, feet and head last. Please let me know what you think so far. Where can I improve? I know the neck needs some work. But I always like to hear what other people have to say.






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Old 02-20-2007, 01:16 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Nice start Josal. The hips and pelvis area could use a little tweaking. But its coming along nicely. Keep it up...:good:
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Old 03-01-2007, 01:20 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Thanks for the tips Obi.
Now I started working on the head. It's split down the middle, what I mean is on half of the face is geometry the other is an instance, that's why you see a sharp line down the middle of the face. Other than that let me know what you think of this so far.






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Old 03-01-2007, 09:12 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Some nice work on the head so far...:good: Can we see a wire frame view?
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Here you go. Any tips..?







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id say the hips as well... look a little high/large.
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What can I say I like my women thick...LOL. All kidding aside I've been meaning to fix that(hips), but I 've been working on the head. Here's another screen shot. On this one I fixed the upper lip , rounded off the chin a bit more and also added the ear and fixed the jaw like.. Let me know what you think. You can be brutally honest..Please.



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Old 03-03-2007, 03:17 PM   #8 (permalink)
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One more post for the head. Tips and pointers are welcome.
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Old 03-04-2007, 12:36 PM   #9 (permalink)
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Here's another screen shot of the body. I worked on the ares suggested. Let me know what you think.

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the head and body's perfect...i hope u have sketch of some pretty women out there.
just keep posting, i'm very interested how will it come up in the end
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Head and boby

Here's another post.
I need feedback please... :)

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She`s coming along nicely Josal. Her breast looks a little odd. Looks like she has silicon implants. Other then that her torso is almost there...:good:
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I agree with obi12077.her breasts look very odd...other that everything's fine
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Thanks guys I'll work on that are.
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Updated model

Ok guys, here we again. I took under cocideration what you said. Here's the model again.

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