WIP: The Bicycle

[giko]

Hi all, This is a project i'm working on, modeled and rendered in Cinema 4D. the bicycle is from 3DM models bank. I hope you all like it, I'm waiting for your suggestions, critices and comments all are welcome.

[giko]

some updates

[giko]

still no comments or critics or even a glass of water, its ok I can live with that :thumbsup:

[giko]

ok guys... comment now and get another comment for free :thumbsup: one day... mmmm... ok.. one year offer :)

[arona]

hey giko actually it looks nice. just those stairs in the ruined part seems a bit strange. looks like you just pulled the vertices down :) . delete faces for that part and creat soem random faces there, with good material it would get so nice.

[arona]

BTW ill claim on my free comment soon :thumbsup:

[giko]

oh my God... at last... comment... thank God
thank you arona. that was bothering me too I'll sure fix it.
and man don't worry your comment worth 10 free comments :thumbsup:

[kengsing]

can do someting on the hole at window, it seems pull in (not construct in concrete) like plastic got burn. n the arc at end of stair is flat, it wud be nice 2 let in some light so that arh shape look more clearly. sorry, i think i'd comment 2 much.

nice image :)

[skinfather]

nice Scene giko i like it, my only critic is on the thing where you pose your hands when you pass the stairs is defying the gravity law

keep it up man. :thumbsup:

[giko]

thanks skinfather for your comment, I lready fixed a lot of things in this scene and I'm preparing it for rendering. I'll post an update soon, so please please comment again after the update.

Thanks a lot, and Happy new year every one

[skinfather]

Yeah i'll do it bro, sorry i didn't comment anything before, i was out of town :D

[giko]

thanks skinfather, and all of you guys :) you are my heroes :thumbsup:

[giko]

Hi all,.. here is some modifications. I hope you all like these clothes :D its not actually filled with man :)
I'm waiting for the great great artists to comment and give the great opinions.
kengsing, still working on the texture of the windows but as you know its a bit difficult for me :)

thanks a lot

[skinfather]

Well i'm not a great artist but i'll comment anyway :P

Looks like that guy is in his sluggish day lol :D

it's a nice scene but there are some things that doens't look right.

The size of the steps is irregular, if you go upstairs you would finish really tired because they are very small, and the can looks like is floating.

your main challenge could be the texturing part, try playing more with them, it will improve a lot the scene. :thumbsup:

[giko]

Hi skinfather, listen :) .... are you listening? :)
I'll tell you the story... this guy has tried to go upstairs for more than.... 200 times and he couldn't and he was always starting over. so as you can see he left his clothes and escaped , his family still looking for him :)
ok man... sorry I can't stop myself... I love tellig jokes :D
anyway I agree with you I try decrease the number of the stairs or may its easier to redo them.
the can maybe if I change its place or crumpled it a bit it will be ok.
for the texture i"m working now on a new texture for the stairs... have no time... so brother... don't expect a lot :D