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Old 11-19-2005, 12:15 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Talking Skyscraper Architecture Study

Hey guys! I just started a new scene the other day. I am making this to improve my architecture modeling. Created in 3dsmax and rendered in VRay.





Comments and critiques are welcomed :D
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Old 11-19-2005, 02:12 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Looks really nice. Like it what you did here. Keep posting.
Maybe the texture are repeating to match. Just my opinion :D
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Old 11-22-2005, 03:13 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Thanks for the comment Novak! I will work on the texturing. Ok here's an update. I added a plane that I just made, a building in the back (which doesn't really look good in my opinion), and a tree at the bottom. Comments please :D

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Well, Nice update, Really. But must agree with you the building behind don't fit.
I have no idea wath you can place there. Hope you will find something. Keep it up
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it seem that images lost for site host movement. may you upload those again?
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You don't see the images? I view them just fine :D
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oh sorry! I see what.

yet I can't see the images because reference website of those filtered from my ISP!
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Ok well if you can't see the image try this link. This is the latest render of the scene (uploaded on my website):

http://necksmasher.3dk.org/architect...toshoped_1.jpg
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I can see the images perfect.... see I don't see any problem.. Probably your browser...
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i can it clear too...btw,i like wht you did with the scene and agree with the building at the back.
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Sorry for no updates in a while...I have been very busy lately and I am studying for my finals which are this week. I added another building and I just made a new one. I know the lighting for the building on the top right is weird...I will fix it soon. Any suggestions? Comments please!

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