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Old 10-19-2004, 04:52 PM   #1 (permalink)
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the nice family house in transilvania

what you say about my work ? look good? I hope the detail is more good
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Old 10-19-2004, 05:01 PM   #2 (permalink)
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looks good but it's too small to appreciate the details
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Old 10-20-2004, 02:18 AM   #3 (permalink)
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dont u get it theare no details and thats why its small........lol...........just kiding man nice work just change the wall color......lol......... :D
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Old 10-20-2004, 12:43 PM   #4 (permalink)
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hei man but what color it's work? Apropos the cat is painting like house :)
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Old 10-20-2004, 12:56 PM   #5 (permalink)
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ok I will change camera lens and position
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I like the desing of the house, but the lights does not match with the sky, in the background seems like the sunlight, comes from behind the clouds and because of the angle of the shadows you can see that the sun is in front of the house.

keep going, good work :thumbsup:
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Old 10-21-2004, 12:34 PM   #7 (permalink)
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Yip, I agree with skinfather, the lighting doesn't match, maybe you could just play around with that a bit and it will make it that extra bit better. Other than that, it is a really nice looking house, I like the deisgn, very cool. :)
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I agree about the lighting, but otherwise it is a very good work.
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very nice work Cstudio!!! just add a skylight to make the renders look more realistic. and add some really cool textures. great modeling work though! keep it updated:D
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Old 11-09-2004, 12:12 PM   #10 (permalink)
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thanks for C&C to all,
I,m good in modeling but I have to work from reality
maybe you can tell me some tips
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