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Old 06-29-2008, 03:22 AM   #1 (permalink)
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My rendered images. CC are welcome!

Hi these are my images rendered with max and vray. Hope you like them. The plazas are in progress as there is no vegetation and luxuries in it.
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Old 08-14-2008, 02:12 PM   #2 (permalink)
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maybe work on the textures a little like the car rims and the windows on the house they should be a little more transparent i think but other than that I think its pretty darn good.

and you said you were using VRay, this is a pretty good site for Vray materials
Vray-materials.de - Your ultimate V-Ray material resource if your interested.

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the ground underneath the car is crazy reflection, if thats what your goin for then by all means....but i would tone it down a little
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man your work is looking good but it seams that house roof need some work on it and i saw that tracking of heli also is looking good but some time its like its runnig out of screen well nice work keep it up
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i just want to give comment for your 1st pict..house with the red roof..
..for me ...it is a good lighting, but work a bit for texturing, and add a bit bump on it.

good work, man...
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Thanks for all your comments guys

Thanks to all, I have noticed those points mentioned in comments. My next posts are now waiting for your interest too. C&C are also welcomed there. Thanks again
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