09-09-2007, 09:27 AM
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Rep Power: 0  | my first architecture of a church w.i.p. hello, i am new at this site and i hope to learn here so i can improve myself to be a better artist. this is my first architecture of a church. |
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09-11-2007, 04:49 PM
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Rep Power: 6   | agree. not bad for a first time. and i think this can be good if you keep working on it :)
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09-12-2007, 05:20 PM
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Rep Power: 1 | Welcome elrondd, suggestions I think u should add more details ex. statues or icons or something like that or mayby just some more details to the walls. You could expand the picture so it will be possible to see more of the church, its a good position u rendered from it makes it look big and finally u should play around with the light a bit, I hope this can help you
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02-21-2008, 10:32 AM
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Rep Power: 5   | I agree with Maxraid, you should add some cool statues and bring out some details in this scene ;) (I also think maybe some vines and stuff growing inside the church from outside would be cool..like there hasn't been anyone inside for years and is left abandoned). Good luck! - Gary
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