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Old 07-03-2007, 07:45 AM   #1 (permalink)
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hi all its been a wile since my last post
what doy you think of my kitchen
if you have any tips please help




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Old 07-03-2007, 08:37 AM   #2 (permalink)
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i think that u must change tje materials!more reflect on some objects
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Old 07-03-2007, 09:15 AM   #3 (permalink)
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thanks for the tip wil try and then post some more renders
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Old 07-04-2007, 03:36 AM   #4 (permalink)
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...other materials...more polygons (seats)...better Lighting...try to bevel the edges...this should be a lot of work...so try this and show us the update...
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Old 07-04-2007, 08:43 AM   #5 (permalink)
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thanks for the tip wil do which materials would you use
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Old 07-04-2007, 10:23 AM   #6 (permalink)
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Old 07-04-2007, 10:26 AM   #7 (permalink)
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Staples ruan kom nou daarna toe vra vir hom om jou te help met di uvw dat jou tafels en goed meer realisties lyk. Sit jou omni's hoog sodat dit soos 'n lig lyk en 'n paar ani voor kant en maak sy intensity minder
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you have some probs that i have marked it the attach

number 1 is a prob with your texturing that have asign ONLY a bitmap and there is no Uv mapping !!

Number 2 is a shadow prob which is becuz of your lighting that has a lot of probs !

number 3 is : you need a Roof and some Walls there !

Number 4 is that i dont understand whats that for ?? ?? ?

But your going great
you should fix this probs

and here is a very important Tip : always!do the uv for ANY Object that you have


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Old 07-25-2007, 06:39 AM   #9 (permalink)
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thanks will try
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Old 09-25-2007, 01:14 PM   #10 (permalink)
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i seem to have lost my original files wil post somthing new soon and will remember all you tips thanks for the help

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