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Old 08-16-2007, 06:48 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Hallway

So this is my new Picture...ist WiP right now...because of the non perfect Objects in it.

I will try to make the Hallway more comfortable.

critics & compliments, please
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Old 08-16-2007, 09:16 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Old 08-16-2007, 09:38 PM   #3 (permalink)
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ok to start with. the room looks damn high when you dont show the roof :)

the plants looks to plastic and you should make better dirst under the plants.

and were is the 3 cube lights coming from?

the pillow inn the sofa stands out a bitt hard and i can really see the shadow on it so it looks unatural and painted on the picture. i alsow recomend caustic to make the finnal tuch on the glasses

cheers Minimus

its a really nice picture though. keep it up.
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Old 08-18-2007, 03:48 PM   #4 (permalink)
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thats it...
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