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Old 09-16-2007, 02:26 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Bedroom

HI Guys
i have started a bedroom Scene
i need some ideas on this one

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Old 09-16-2007, 09:37 PM   #2 (permalink)
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I think the 'blanket' (or whatever you call it) will be more 'natural' if you use the cloth simulation. Now it looks too 'fake'. Other than that, not too bad :)

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Old 09-17-2007, 04:44 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Hemm
ur right
im working more on the bed
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Old 10-07-2007, 06:42 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Idea Changed
Here is an update
let me know if is Good or not
comments are most welcome
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Old 10-07-2007, 09:47 AM   #5 (permalink)
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I think you need to make the 'blanket' smoother, its too 'low-poly' right now. Other than that, everything looks fine except the wooden material, which can be better ;)

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Old 10-07-2007, 11:18 AM   #6 (permalink)
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not bad. I think that the intruded box near the bed isn't good enough, 'cos I can see by the windows the thickness of the wall, but its thinner than I can see by the intruded box. BTW nice
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Hemmm
Makes Sense
THnx FOr the Clue Buddy
ill FIx that ;)
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