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pradipta · 12-08-2004, 05:35 PM

hi, i am making this one to test the outdoor lighting. it's in wip and texturing is not finished yet. wanted to know if the lighting is coming properly.

first one is normal rendering and the second one is b/w

would appreaciate comment. thanks

giko · 12-08-2004, 09:55 PM

I think its perfect, the middle part is a bit over exposed but I like it :thumbsup:

pradipta · 12-09-2004, 02:34 AM

thanks giko:

ok, i will do it. it's very much in wip

*Izmal* · 12-09-2004, 06:47 AM

Hey pradipta, i like your model,lighting....nice
but, this is what i think...notice the red circle, well...i think the light mixture there is a bit weird?dont you think so...?then the red line is you direct light(source)...so,i think the gradient falloff should be towards the blue line.

*hope this help...sorry if im wrong

pradipta · 12-09-2004, 06:26 PM

nice to see your comments, izmal.

i got your point. i will se to it. i will work more on the light.

in the meantime my second render.

skinfather · 12-09-2004, 08:31 PM

Nice work, i like it :thumbsup:

pradipta · 12-10-2004, 01:28 AM

thanks skinfather,

pradipta · 12-10-2004, 04:19 PM

played with light some more, here

giko · 12-10-2004, 07:11 PM

go on man, its getting better and better :thumbsup:

pradipta · 12-11-2004, 06:49 AM

thanks giko,

my third test render. worked with light and textures.
would like to see comments on overall mood.

pradipta · 12-11-2004, 06:39 PM

my fourth test render. worked with light and textures. would like to see comments on overall moods.

giko · 12-12-2004, 08:18 AM

yeah, much much better, the lighting now perfect, and the guys on the wall are super :) bravo and the windows on top are so real... keep up the good work :thumbsup:

pradipta · 12-12-2004, 03:38 PM

thanks giko

pradipta · 12-12-2004, 03:52 PM

my fifth test render. worked with light and textures a bit. also tried to better the composition. would like to see comments on overall moods.

*Millies45* · 12-14-2004, 06:59 PM

Hey pradipta, no crits at all, I think it looks great...Nice work.:)

12-08-2004, 05:35 PM	#1 (permalink)
pradipta Registered User View My Portfolio Join Date: May 2003 Posts: 266 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Rep Power: 6	architecture : outdoor lighting hi, i am making this one to test the outdoor lighting. it's in wip and texturing is not finished yet. wanted to know if the lighting is coming properly. first one is normal rendering and the second one is b/w would appreaciate comment. thanks

12-08-2004, 09:55 PM	#2 (permalink)
giko Registered User View My Portfolio Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Cairo-Egypt Age: 37 Posts: 168 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Rep Power: 5	I think its perfect, the middle part is a bit over exposed but I like it :thumbsup: __________________ "Your future depends on your dreams" .... So go to sleep See more of my work @ my web site - The Bicycle - The Italian Restaurant

12-09-2004, 06:26 PM	#5 (permalink)
pradipta Registered User View My Portfolio Join Date: May 2003 Posts: 266 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Rep Power: 6	hi... nice to see your comments, izmal. i got your point. i will se to it. i will work more on the light. in the meantime my second render.

12-10-2004, 04:19 PM	#8 (permalink)
pradipta Registered User View My Portfolio Join Date: May 2003 Posts: 266 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Rep Power: 6	hi.. played with light some more, here

12-10-2004, 07:11 PM	#9 (permalink)
giko Registered User View My Portfolio Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Cairo-Egypt Age: 37 Posts: 168 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Rep Power: 5	go on man, its getting better and better :thumbsup: __________________ "Your future depends on your dreams" .... So go to sleep See more of my work @ my web site - The Bicycle - The Italian Restaurant

12-09-2004, 02:34 AM	#3 (permalink)
pradipta Registered User View My Portfolio Join Date: May 2003 Posts: 266 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Rep Power: 6	thanks giko: ok, i will do it. it's very much in wip

12-09-2004, 06:47 AM	#4 (permalink)
Izmal Forum Moderator View My Portfolio Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: Kuala Lumpur, Malaysia Posts: 644 Thanks: 1 Thanked 4 Times in 3 Posts Rep Power: 6	Hey pradipta, i like your model,lighting....nice but, this is what i think...notice the red circle, well...i think the light mixture there is a bit weird?dont you think so...?then the red line is you direct light(source)...so,i think the gradient falloff should be towards the blue line. *hope this help...sorry if im wrong

12-09-2004, 08:31 PM	#6 (permalink)
skinfather Registered User View My Portfolio Join Date: Sep 2003 Posts: 226 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Rep Power: 6	Nice work, i like it :thumbsup:

12-10-2004, 01:28 AM	#7 (permalink)
pradipta Registered User View My Portfolio Join Date: May 2003 Posts: 266 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Rep Power: 6	thanks skinfather,

12-11-2004, 06:49 AM	#10 (permalink)
pradipta Registered User View My Portfolio Join Date: May 2003 Posts: 266 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Rep Power: 6	hi... thanks giko, my third test render. worked with light and textures. would like to see comments on overall mood.

12-11-2004, 06:39 PM	#11 (permalink)
pradipta Registered User View My Portfolio Join Date: May 2003 Posts: 266 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Rep Power: 6	my fourth test render. worked with light and textures. would like to see comments on overall moods.

12-12-2004, 08:18 AM	#12 (permalink)
giko Registered User View My Portfolio Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Cairo-Egypt Age: 37 Posts: 168 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Rep Power: 5	yeah, much much better, the lighting now perfect, and the guys on the wall are super :) bravo and the windows on top are so real... keep up the good work :thumbsup: __________________ "Your future depends on your dreams" .... So go to sleep See more of my work @ my web site - The Bicycle - The Italian Restaurant

12-12-2004, 03:38 PM	#13 (permalink)
pradipta Registered User View My Portfolio Join Date: May 2003 Posts: 266 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Rep Power: 6	thanks giko

12-12-2004, 03:52 PM	#14 (permalink)
pradipta Registered User View My Portfolio Join Date: May 2003 Posts: 266 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Rep Power: 6	my fifth test render. worked with light and textures a bit. also tried to better the composition. would like to see comments on overall moods.

12-14-2004, 06:59 PM	#15 (permalink)
Millies45 Forum Moderator View My Portfolio Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: SA - Jo'burg Age: 27 Posts: 818 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Rep Power: 6	Hey pradipta, no crits at all, I think it looks great...Nice work.:) __________________

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