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Old 07-03-2006, 03:35 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Suzuki Swift.

I made it all in two days. Please suggest areas of improvements and methods for lights and doors and windows.
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Old 07-04-2006, 02:45 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Here is an update on this. I managed to get the headlights. I want to get the doors and windows right but not sure how to approach them.
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Old 07-05-2006, 12:04 PM   #3 (permalink)
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done a litle more stuff, take a look at the renders and advise what i can improve.
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Old 07-05-2006, 01:50 PM   #4 (permalink)
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not bad yashrg... you may make better in the future .....
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here is a render from the inside. please help me improve the dashboard and make other stuff inside the car.
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Old 07-07-2006, 07:26 AM   #6 (permalink)
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Well, I finally managed to do some of the dashboard myself... see for urself and let me know. I actually made a mistake this time, the render was saved in high quality and the file size went over the limit. so i had to crop this one. now from the next time, i`l save jpegs at medium quality.
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Old 07-09-2006, 12:32 PM   #7 (permalink)
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in The previous one, i noticed that the steering was a little too thin so here is another update with the steering broadened.please...any kinds of comments are welcome.
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cool...but where is the other inside stuff..
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hehe..its gonna come one by one or maybe not..I am making the stuff thats very apparent from the outside from windshild and side windows. not really planning on having any inside shots. like this render...
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look good...

for improvement... do pay attention more on detail.. there are some area that should have sharp edges... mostly at bumpers..
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thanks a lot for the comments. I didnt have time to improve upon the model a lot lately..so I`m just going ahead with the final renders...will post some soon
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here is a render. I`m really bugged by the file size limitations....well let me know what u think.
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it's cool but ..please would you post more renders.
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http://www.maximage.be/
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ok I am uploading on my imageshack account and posting some renders here. not many though because I am having a rendering problem...have a look at this thread saved image darker than the preview in max render window.
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