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Old 12-06-2004, 11:28 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Subaru Impreza (work in progress)

Hiya, this is my first 3d car model, I created it in 3d max, I am pleased with the result so far. Any constructive criticsm welcome.


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Old 12-14-2004, 09:08 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Old 12-14-2004, 05:13 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Nice work, but you need to work the car painting, try with a lower diffuse value :thumbsup:
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Old 12-14-2004, 06:57 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Last pic the best, but need to work with glass. Keep up
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Old 12-15-2004, 06:39 AM   #5 (permalink)
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cheers for advise guys, I will give it a go.
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Old 12-17-2004, 09:11 AM   #6 (permalink)
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The last picture looks great man! You just need to play arround with your shaders and it will be ok.
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Old 12-19-2004, 06:17 PM   #7 (permalink)
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any better?

ok played arond with the materials, i.e paint glass etc the color now looks more like the one on my car. I also added wing mirrors. :thumbsup:

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Ah boy! now we are talking! let me guess... you used Vray to render this!? Just another observation... the windshields look dead a little! have you tried to increase IOR or the glossiness?
great progress!!!
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Old 12-20-2004, 11:12 AM   #9 (permalink)
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I see what you mean about them looking dead, I have the opacity quite low so as to disguise the fact there is no interior but I am currently modelling that so hopefully when that is put in it should look better
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this last pic looks extremely good

keep up the good work!
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Old 12-28-2004, 06:47 PM   #11 (permalink)
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update

Ive tweaked things further now, paint, added brake discs,interior etc.
hope you like it.


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Old 12-28-2004, 09:51 PM   #12 (permalink)
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this looks better....can we see some other view?
*keep up the good work
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