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Old 01-05-2009, 03:44 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Space extrakter...

Hi This is a space ship that I am making..
currently i have used about 2 hours on this thingy, modeling.

I hope i can get some critiques on this model. so i can make it better.
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Old 01-05-2009, 03:56 PM   #2 (permalink)
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looks pretty good so far. only thing i'd change would be the hydraulic system. as is it wouldn't function in the current configuration.
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Old 01-05-2009, 08:02 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Don't worry about critiques, we are here professionals in finding mistakes. Wow, that is nice. A wonderful model you have there, but as mike said it wouldn't be functional here on normal gravity, but on moon yeah. But what would I do, I would add for example another hydraulic thing between hes two 'legs'...

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i cant wait to see what you do with the textures, but as far as the modeling goes it looks good to me
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Old 01-06-2009, 04:13 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Hehe I know it look a bitt weak. I have ben thinking about it. I will post some more pictures when i create some...

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