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Old 09-02-2007, 11:26 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Rx8 by Amin

Hi guys
i have started a mazda rX8
here is a test render , and a wire frame
help me on with the project
comments are most welcome
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Old 09-02-2007, 11:37 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Will Keep u updated ;)
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looks a lot better than your first one, keep it up, good work

PS: make the line between the bumper and the hood a little cleaner
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Old 09-02-2007, 04:19 PM   #4 (permalink)
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oh! nice start.

i want to gett inn to car modeling my self but i dont know were to start....i always end up making somthing that i allready can:P

some tips?
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Old 09-03-2007, 03:10 AM   #5 (permalink)
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THnx loebedoe, yes ur right , i should make the line more cleaner , Will Try ,

Thnx minimus
i have done some cars before , but didnt finishe them , i find myself more skilled now , so im going to finish this
maybe you better start with RX8 , so i can help you
start out with a thread and i start helping you Bro ;)
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Old 09-03-2007, 04:09 AM   #6 (permalink)
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i have make the line more cleaner , and the place between side and hood is more Cleaner ,
going to Back
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Old 09-03-2007, 06:29 AM   #7 (permalink)
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the side of the back is Done
im going to Complete the back


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ok i had some time to take a closer look at your model, i founded somethings that you should change a bit, like you can see on this picture
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Old 09-03-2007, 01:12 PM   #9 (permalink)
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hemmm
ur right
im now working on the back
will do the front after that maybe
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didnt fix the front
but i have found the back SHape
hope its Fine
COmments are welcome guys
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Still NO comments
Come on guys

Here is update
doors added
do they look fine ?
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joo srr about the late reply but school started again so i'm a bit busy now, but here i am, can you make a render in grey cause its hard to see some stuff

any questions just ask ok
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Old 09-07-2007, 12:44 PM   #13 (permalink)
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Ok guys
THe car finished
it took me 6 days
thnx to loebedoe's help
im happy with the result , i know the rendering is not good , but its not also bad ;)
i will start another car soon
Please comment on this one
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looks awsome dude! the lights are crazy how did you do them? i like the rims aswell, niiice!
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Thnx Men
im Glad you like it
i made the lights by Cylinder , and a bit of extrude to find the shape ,
i want to start a new car
maybe Mitsubishi Lancer
if i start it i will make a thread for the progsess ,

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