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Old 09-23-2009, 02:35 AM   #46 (permalink)
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Hey man, this model it's a great improvement over the previous one, congrats, really nice progress.
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Old 11-07-2009, 11:32 PM   #47 (permalink)
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After a long time i am postign some more updates, you will see that many things have changed during some steps, but those changes where from bad to good. Hope you like it! C&C Please. The test render is not good i know i am a beginer at MR i am used to vray but i dont have it at the moment.


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Old 12-10-2009, 08:12 AM   #48 (permalink)
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looks nice might i recommend a environment map that will really get those reflections looking sweet.

i' am not sure if you have finished or not

but if you haven't you should consider modeling the emblem and inside the lights that would look amazing.

1 more thing xD try and turn down the lights a bit to much reflections going on other than that you really have out done your self on the modeling part congraz (Y)
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Old 12-10-2009, 08:17 AM   #49 (permalink)
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The modeling is spotless but the texture seems really foggy.I know I should not judge things which I can not do myself but its just my opinion.
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Old 12-11-2009, 04:29 AM   #50 (permalink)
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really nice modeling...and it's clean...but work and lighting and environment for the render....and it will be perfect...
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Old 02-12-2010, 12:54 AM   #51 (permalink)
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Hi guys, thanks for the comments(i know i am a bit late, but nvm :D)

Moshie@ I am faaaar from finished :D. I have tons and tons of work to do, it's just sometimes hard to keep my motivation . And yeah i know the render is terrible.I did it with MR witch i am a beginer at, because i didn't have vray due to a pc reinstallation, but now i am back at vray so it's look better, not great, but better :-) Thanks

Bam@ Yep you are right they are very bad, and everybody can tell their opinion no matter if you can do better than the person who you are commenting or not! Thanks

amek@ Thanks!

Anyway here are some new renders with vray and some wires and progresss images :-) I hope you like it!

PS : The stuido renders are quite old and some parts are missing, but i thought i could put theme here too! And sorry for no using the attachment system, but i could only add 3 images at a time and plus my attahcmnet memory is full, so i would have to delete some ol dstuff and i don't want to :D

Oh yeah and if you want to look at it on imageshack as a slideshow, here is a link, i guese it could be faster than wating for the images to load here

http://img41.imageshack.us/slideshow...estrender7.jpg









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Old 02-13-2010, 07:32 AM   #52 (permalink)
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Hi guys, it's me again! And another update! This time it's not on the car, but on thze front emblem! So far it's not done yet and it's headless :D I hope that by tomorrow i will have it complete!And yeah i know that this emblem is for the mustang 2010, but well i just so love how it looks that i had to make it :D. Cya




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Old 02-13-2010, 12:13 PM   #53 (permalink)
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Hi, a little update! I cahned some stuff, tweaked some, and you know what i mean :-) .
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Old 02-20-2010, 05:28 AM   #54 (permalink)
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Hi guys! Here is my almost complete mustang horse, he is missing a mane and i will have to smooth the head out a bit, it's kind of bumby and maybe add some more details. However the main part is complete. Check it out!




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Old 05-15-2010, 08:16 AM   #55 (permalink)
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Hi, after a few months i have another update :D. Just check it out and tell me if you like it or not!


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Old 05-22-2010, 04:53 AM   #56 (permalink)
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wow! that's a sleek mustang logo! very clean modeling but great result!
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Old 05-22-2010, 09:32 AM   #57 (permalink)
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hey. honzik i really like the way you are working on it. just the right way to do it mate tho the test renders you posted above are not good enough i suppose its because they are test render .. i would love to see the final outcome. keep up the good work.
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Old 04-10-2011, 02:10 PM   #58 (permalink)
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fast work and nice modeling , nice render too cool i like it
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