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Old 09-25-2008, 07:11 AM   #1 (permalink)
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modeling citroen c2, advice and crit please!

hi guys, have been working on this model on and off for the last couple of months and is my first car model.

Any critique would be much appreciated. My final aim is to get this as realistic as possible without having to model the interior. the details that remain are brake disks, front windscreen wipers, badges and rear exhaust ( and no doubt i'll find some others Smile.

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Old 09-25-2008, 03:33 PM   #2 (permalink)
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post a wire frame mate, unsmooted
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hey dude, here are some wires, I've already started to match up the door with the rest of the body, which is something pointed out for poly-flow. but any advice would be much appreciated!






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made some changes; improving poly-flow.





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looking @ th fisrt picture the head light dont look right the rear (and i know im a Citroën Car engineer :) ) the strips next to the windshield look kinda od ... other then that looks good but im missing the DOuble Cevron and C2 :)
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