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Old 07-30-2008, 01:43 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Hi guys.

this is my first car modeling using maya.

i really need your comments and critics, and of course more suggestion.
many thing that i still don't understand using maya.

any c&c also suggestion really appreciate.


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Old 07-30-2008, 01:48 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Old 07-30-2008, 11:26 AM   #3 (permalink)
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dont know much about cars but looks like a good start. doing the freelander from www.evermotion.com ?
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Old 07-30-2008, 11:45 AM   #4 (permalink)
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To much early for coment. But beginning is nice. (Sorry if i wrote wrong). Carry on!
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Old 07-30-2008, 11:10 PM   #5 (permalink)
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thanks guys.
i'll post some more.

as i mentioned, this is my first time using maya,i usually use 3dsmax.
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Old 08-02-2008, 12:30 AM   #6 (permalink)
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i try to re-build it.
and i hope this is much better.

c&c welcome.

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some progress that i've made
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Old 08-03-2008, 01:09 AM   #8 (permalink)
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Old 08-04-2008, 12:42 AM   #9 (permalink)
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cool this is getting togheter realy well keep it up :) looks like a clean and good mesh.
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thanks minimus.

i'm about making the tyre and some interior, still not so sure that i will make a complete interior or not
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i try to build the rim..but i think i'm gonna change it or just re-build it.

can anybody show me how to make a good rim, or is there any tutorial to make a rim, that easy for me to follow.

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nice progress i dont know much about this car XD :P
plz post some reel life pic of of this car :)
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nice progress i dont know much about this car XD :P
plz post some reel life pic of of this car :)
ok...here you go..
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looks like i can not finish it with maya, i still need to learn much using maya.
so i move the object to 3ds max.
so here they go.

please give me you comment and crits

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