Ferrari F430

[amin2001]

Thnx Mate
Thats GreaT:) iF you have Questions Just Ask me
here is a New Test Render , but i am remodeling the Rear Bumper , it looks Awful :))

[amin2001]

im Done with modeling Guys
Here is The Clay Result

[alitto]

hi amin

im alitt,currently working in a games development studio n hv been working on racing titles for the past years.been doing cars and other vehicles ever since :)
you chose to model a really nice car ;) and overall the shape,proportions and dimensions looks good.good job mate!!
however there are some specific issues that IMHO need to be taken into account to make ur ferrari approximately 100% accurate :)
i would like to apologize beforehand if my comments offend u in anyway,just here to help yea
below is the link of a ur model which i put side by side with a reference pic, the closest angle i could find that matches ur models render angle
this is the front part:



1. the shape of the air intake is rounder
2. theres a curviture at the bottom end of the bumper,currently urs is sharp
3. the shape of the headlight differs from reference.positions of the lamps are correct
4. when u fix no.3, it will also help correct the no.4 problem
5. this can be ignored coz im still not sure of the exact shape of the sidemirrors coz limited render views.
6. same as the front bumper bottom end,theres a curviture
7. the thickness of the tyre seems odd,bulging out too much

this is the rear part:


1.the bonnet and the body work is flush,currently urs has a bump where the shutlines meet
2.the line needs to be more sharper,chamfer it at a very close range and u might fix it :)
3.theres should be a slight roundness to the edge,it will be a bit tricky to fix that
4.from the reference,there isnt any bulging line below the bumpers shutline
5. same as no.4,that area should be flush
6. this part needs some alteration to match the reference,currently its too thick and the curviture isnt accurate
7. if u turn ur model to match the reference pic,u might spot this one :)
8. theres a dent on the bodywork which causes this, this area is important bcoz its one of the main features of the car
9. theres also a dent here and the rear pillar need reshaping to fix it
10.also a dent on the bodywork,need alteration to fix the curve

sorry if its a bit too long, but i see a lot of potential in ur modeling, it would be great if u model a nice car with 100% accuracy. honestly ull feel good bout urself.i hvnt had time to view ur interior n engine, but it would be great if u could post them seperately

hope this helps :)
have a nice day bro!

[alitto]

im alitt,currently working in a games development studio n hv been working on racing titles for the past years.been doing cars and other vehicles ever since :)
you chose to model a really nice car ;) and overall the shape,proportions and dimensions looks good.good job mate!!
however there are some specific issues that IMHO need to be taken into account to make ur ferrari approximately 100% accurate :)
i would like to apologize beforehand if my comments offend u in anyway,just here to help yea
below is the link of a ur model which i put side by side with a reference pic, the closest angle i could find that matches ur models render angle
this is the front part:



1. the shape of the air intake is rounder
2. theres a curviture at the bottom end of the bumper,currently urs is sharp
3. the shape of the headlight differs from reference.positions of the lamps are correct
4. when u fix no.3, it will also help correct the no.4 problem
5. this can be ignored coz im still not sure of the exact shape of the sidemirrors coz limited render views.
6. same as the front bumper bottom end,theres a curviture
7. the thickness of the tyre seems odd,bulging out too much

this is the rear part:


1.the bonnet and the body work is flush,currently urs has a bump where the shutlines meet
2.the line needs to be more sharper,chamfer it at a very close range and u might fix it :)
3.theres should be a slight roundness to the edge,it will be a bit tricky to fix that
4.from the reference,there isnt any bulging line below the bumpers shutline
5. same as no.4,that area should be flush
6. this part needs some alteration to match the reference,currently its too thick and the curviture isnt accurate
7. if u turn ur model to match the reference pic,u might spot this one :)
8. theres a dent on the bodywork which causes this, this area is important bcoz its one of the main features of the car
9. theres also a dent here and the rear pillar need reshaping to fix it
10.also a dent on the bodywork,need alteration to fix the curve

sorry if its a bit too long, but i see a lot of potential in ur modeling, it would be great if u model a nice car with 100% accuracy. honestly ull feel good bout urself.i hvnt had time to view ur interior n engine, but it would be great if u could post them seperately

hope this helps :)
have a nice day bro!

[amin2001]

You Did a Great Helpppppp man
i was Shoked in the begining :))
but they were all Great Tips
THnxxxx , THnx a loT

i have finished the Car , And the render , you can see it on Main Gallery
Thnx again BRO !

[alitto]

ur most welcome
glad i could help.i couldnt find ur finished render at the main gallery.can gimme the link?
its really nice to see youngsters having passion in modeling cars, I started quite late heheh, now i feel old...hahahahahha!
all the best bro!

[SPWAR]

Amin2001,

Great result! I've just seen it on the Main Gallery.

It would really be good if you finish this thread with the final result or just post a link...

[amin2001]

Thnx Allito , i wish i could be as good as you some day :)
u did a big help , THnx again

Spwar : Thank you bro , its kind of you
Sure Dude, here is the Pictures

[Izmal]

great work amin2001..trust me, you should get tips from this guy(allito)..been working with this 'car freak' and trying to persuade him to join this forum...at last thanks allito!

[alitto]

haha go to sleep lahhhh izmal ;p
im not a car freak...more towards a car enthusiast hehe
if given time, ill try and post some of my work for ur viewing amin...perhaps u might get a basic idea on where and what to focus on when modeling cars :)

izmal is the purest 3d freak of all!!! hehe...sleep time..zzzzzzzzzzz

[Izmal]

Aahh..shut up!!make sure you post some of your work here..~
see you in the office...FREAK!!LEMAU!!LAKNAT!

[alitto]

haha...damn you izmal ;p
ehhh izmal...where's ur posts of ur works? dont comment on others only...show us ur ability as the superduperfreak of 3D

[amin2001]

hey guys
whats up with the freak thing :))

thnx allito for the tips

maybe i can see your guys works
:)

[alitto]

haha sorry for spamming ur thread amin, me and izmal are officemates, we're just teasing each other

yeah, ur welcome man. u can check out my WIP of my fairlady 350z ;) perhaps we could share some ideas or suggestions...cheers!