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[jidoman]

hi, thats my new work
still working on details but here is firsth render :)

[Elyu]

very nice work, but the mtl seems stange, what's that blue color?

[WaOne]

make attempt finish off materials.
they at you look enough badly.
and a model pleased to me.

[amin2001]

give it a Black color and Some more mesh smooth
And add A Red Neon Light Under your Car
Ur doing Great

[jidoman]

thx for your commets, i was a little busy but i didnt abandoned this car
more update soon :) see ya

[minimus]

hmmmm.....the modeling looks ok, but i think you need a new material as the other people say:P

[kramiekie]

not bad at all try making the car black and give it something to reflect but nice job

[jidoman]

still working on it.....when i have time

[Need_Help]

Frankly...your model seems to have some problem. The 'shape' of the car was weird and.....can you provide blueprints that you used and show a wireframe image? As other people said too, your materials need to be changed. I've circled a few problems, some are mesh problem, some are materials, and can I ask you, why the seat is 'refracted' in such way too? I didn't see any car in real life that the seat was refracted like that and all the 'interior' of the car seems to be in water, maybe because of your 'tint' of blue colour and the refraction.


Thats all the 'problems' that I can see at the moment. Thanks and sorry for the long post. I hope this post won't be 'offensive' for you, those are just my opinions and 'problems' that I spotted.

[jidoman]

thx NH, for your comments good eyes
but that´s why is a wip :) thoose problems mesh i see it too, but i dont like to spend much time doing a only part, so in doing all parts (series) end then i will return to do the tunned parts (then i will give a close atencion to the mesh since will be the final part)

and for the materials r good (i think) only my setting up a scene for render i belive is a mess
and for a interior is reflecting that way because the window has a water material :)

easy im not mad for your comments, im glad that u see it and take by your time to say somethink ( and i say again, i dont like posts like ¨wow,cool ,dude¨ is not cool i did it and i know every little mistake ive done, until i do mistakes is not cool)

[Need_Help]

No problem :) I'm glad that you can accept my critiques even they are so 'cruel' lol. I like people like you, that are willing to accept other people's comment. Some people just can't accept the truth that his/her scene was ugly/not good, but you are totally different :) I'm sure you can improve and I also hope that you will fix all the 'problems' :)

Thanks and have a nice day :)