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Old 10-23-2010, 11:35 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Bugatti & Audi

Hi there !

Here are my very first models. Bugatti & Audi
I just started 3d modeling 1month ago I think.

Please critique and give sugestions.
Don't be affraid to pos! ;)

Bugatti & Audi-bugatti.jpg

Bugatti & Audi-audi.jpg

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Old 10-24-2010, 08:54 AM   #2 (permalink)
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from the looks on the pics there are a lot of things i can say, but i can say exactly where you went wrong if i don't see any wire-frames, so first tip i can give you is, if you want ppl to correct your mistakes or point out what you can do better, post some wire-frame screenshots :)
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Oh.
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Didn't know. :)

Here are the Wireframe pics of the Bugatti ;).

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Bugatti & Audi-wire3.jpg

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Now of the Audi:
Bugatti & Audi-wirea1.jpg

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Old 10-28-2010, 06:39 AM   #5 (permalink)
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i actiualy ment a wireframe from the unsmoothed mesh, srr, so no turbosmooth or meshsmooth and maybe some screenshot from closer up, will be easyer to correct stuff on
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this 2 cars will make an amazing studio render. very nice so far
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gr8 waiting the final render keep going this work.
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