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Old 06-15-2009, 04:21 PM   #1 (permalink)
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first of all hi:D
I try to learn softimage xsi so I model Ds car in xsi base on a tutorial:-" :"> :D
so I will improve render&model accorDng to ur C&C:p
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Old 06-19-2009, 07:55 AM   #2 (permalink)
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I like it...
but the carpaint is just too glossy i think...
and small fix on tire texture.
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Old 06-19-2009, 08:43 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Yeah the paint is the ONLY problem,everything else is good.It is a WIP right ;P
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Old 06-20-2009, 08:47 AM   #4 (permalink)
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could you post some wires plz
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Old 06-23-2009, 03:26 AM   #5 (permalink)
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ok thanks 4 ur comments
I'll try to fix them...
and this is the wire ...;)
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Old 06-27-2009, 04:01 PM   #6 (permalink)
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another render
a little change in antialaising:-"
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Your last render looks better...but i still think the tire is to dark.
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Old 08-26-2009, 07:59 PM   #8 (permalink)
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ok .. after a long time I refered to this project.. and hit again the render button
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Old 08-29-2009, 07:09 AM   #9 (permalink)
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Hey modeling is superb....no doubt...
Things which i dint like is... tyre,rendering and texturing...


Improvements:

1.For the Tyre >>Polygon Modeling:Car Tyres
2.Improve your rendering quality.
3.Texturing and Shading is also need to tune a bit
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yeah... I could model the tyre but thsi time I prefer to do it with bump adn something like this..
about rendering car with mentalray in xsi :D if u have a tutorial give it me unTl I find my way faster than Bfore:D:p
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well that's a really cool bmw there.nice work
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