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Old 11-24-2010, 09:03 AM   #16 (permalink)
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nicely done!!!
i got just one problem here. The holes between plates are in my opinion a bit too large. And corners sholud be probably sharper.

BUT beside this... great work!

btw, i modelled this car too ;) take a look
http://palguta.com/images/entry_imag..._m5_full_0.jpg
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http://palguta.com/images/entry_imag..._m5_full_2.jpg

(don't look at render quality, look fro hole between plates)
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Old 11-24-2010, 11:52 PM   #17 (permalink)
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Thanks milki, yes you are right, some gaps between body panels are big. Ill try to fix them. Here is my other project I'm working on:
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Old 11-26-2010, 10:10 PM   #18 (permalink)
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Here is update:
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Old 11-27-2010, 05:04 AM   #19 (permalink)
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looks better
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Old 11-27-2010, 06:54 PM   #20 (permalink)
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Very nice car, and interion.
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Old 11-29-2010, 10:17 PM   #21 (permalink)
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Thanks milki and Denis Ivankovic for reply. I decided to build tire tread and not to use bump map. Here is update:
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Old 12-10-2010, 01:27 PM   #22 (permalink)
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that's really nice, good job...
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ou yeaaaa

now its looking anstonishing
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Thanks milki, I still have to finish interior.
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Amazing Render, i like the environement lighting & no comment about modeling just wonderfulllllllll, maybe u can help me after reading my post :))

Congr8 nice work m8.
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