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Old 05-30-2007, 02:53 AM   #1 (permalink)
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This is my first WIP in 3dm3, so I hope I will get some comments and of course, critiques.
The first 3 pictures were done some time ago, probably last 2 or 3 weeks and the 4th picture was rendered today. Some mesh errors in the first 3 pictures had been removed in the 4th image.





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P.S. : This is my first time modelling a car, so I hope I will get more 'constructive' comments so that I can improve my car modelling skill

Edit : Forgot to attach the image, its the same as the 4th image.
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Old 05-30-2007, 06:19 AM   #2 (permalink)
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hey, first of all if this is your first car model.. its a pritty good start, my first car looked like a trampled soft drink box :D
ok when i look to your model, i see that you have some unsmooth part, like on the roof, try to keep it as smooth as possible all the time, don't use to mush polygons
can you post some unsmooted wires ??
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keep it up it looks good so far
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Wow, really nice for a first try!
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Old 08-22-2007, 06:27 AM   #5 (permalink)
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hey man looks gud hope to see some progress
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