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Old 05-18-2007, 09:19 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Smile hi every1 , opinions plz!

hi every1 .. im new to the forums and this is my first post..
i only wanted to put some of my work for u guys to tell me ur opinions .. comments and criticism are totally welcome :)
please note that the design of this building is not mine its a client's design who assigned me to make him a really quick 3d model (really short time).
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Nice works, but renders too not contract.

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what do u mean too not contract? what should i work on .. ty :)
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Old 05-19-2007, 11:16 AM   #4 (permalink)
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the model looks ok, but the render is to blury and the contrast betwin the model and the enviroment is to alike, make another colore or somthing on the sourondings to make the model stand out more:)
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lol can i know which 1 r u talking about or both? for the building its just 20cmx45cm images for printouts so resolution is low coz of that , the first 1 was sharpened with PS CS2 so i cant make it clearer :)
anyway thanks so much for ur opinion
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haha lol i din't see the second image sorry, i was talking about the "temple" thing.
the second one need more light..thats for sure. give it more light and reflection on the glas so it will look more realistic.
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tell me if thats better :)
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The colore diffrences is better but the overal picture is to week. need more light:)
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