Military in your blood: WIP Update Phase Nine

[LanceJZ]

This is my WIP so far.

WIP 3D Model Scene Render

A Monitor class warship from the civil war used around 1860-1880.

Phase Nine

Please click on the picture to see the full sized rendered picture.

I made and attached the rudder and added some materials. Took me longer then I thought. Worked on the water too. I made changes to the water but sense it took over three hours for me to render that scene. I know the water needs more tweaking. I also need to work on the sky. Next is the hatch and water-stopper for the deck.
I look forward to hearing from you all.

Take care everyone,

Lance

[arona]

i saw your work really good work. for improvements i think you need to increase the datails on the floor of your model that this part is most important place of your model. you can model some details or make a good material or both of them. go on.

[LanceJZ]

Thank you, from you that means allot. I thought at first sense I'm a noob that I did not have a chance.
I'm not sure what you mean by floor. I'm adding some parts to the deck next.
Also I did not mean for this to be a new thread, it was supose to be on my orginal thread. Can some one help?
Now I've done it, I deleted my orginal post thinking I was deleting the poll. I'm such a dunce.

[LanceJZ]

I've decided I don't have enough time to be able to make a model by the deadline. I just don't know enough, I'm too new to this. I don't have enough time to learn more by the deadline. There is no way I can compeat with the C-1 model. That is who I think I'll be voting for.
Can I get this thread moved to WIP?