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Old 12-08-2008, 07:10 PM   #1 (permalink)
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my human study

hi everyone I'm AmrThabet I'm still a beginner in this field just 1 year or nearby half year in 3D .

now this's my first model studying human anatomy and my first character (real character) I don't complete it just the modelling still the texturing

I'm waiting ur reply and I hope you rate as a beginner and as an artist
like 6/10 or 70/100 I really hope to do that this really will put me in the line

this the pics of him I didn't name him

my last thing I want to say I don't finish him and I will put the end pic of him again

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Old 12-23-2008, 06:05 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Dear AmrThabet... This model is just perfect. I cant see anything wrong with it, except... you know... you are missing a part. If you are really going to do this good, make him a penis.

Other than that I can give you 9/10 and I will explain. I gave you 9 because body is not full, not textured and you didn't stated software that you used as well the wire picture.

PS: Let me give you a tip, since you are beginner. If you put wire next to your textured/untextured model, people will see how good you really are in making shapes in 3D. I may have some other tips, but for now it's enough. Just keep working on that model and you'll be fine.

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very thanks for ur post and rate really really thanks for ur rate .I will jump to teturing in ps but I'm just try to see if the model is good to begin texturing

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I must give you 9 just because the missing part. I study human body as well, I am bio medic engineer at the mechanic university. I'm now 2nd year and this is my chosen class.

Anyway, long story short, don't be embarrassed to 'add' vital organ to your model. This is art, and trust me none of the current members are not going to mock you or report you, and besides he (it) will need it ...

Other than that, I give you a clear 10/10. You see, this is the part that I don't know very well, and that is modeling a character (witch ever).

PS: Can you just show me the wire on that model, when I see the wire I can finally rate it for good. Tnx...

Keep up the good work, and have a Merry Christmas

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thank u SDA for this I have an updated version of the model I will upload it soon ,it has the vital organ and it was on wireframe (but in zbrush)

thank you for ur replies to my thread really thanks

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