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*Millies45* · 12-21-2003, 08:07 PM

This is a scene i am working on for my short story. This is a very early render of my scene. It is still not textured properley. I welcome any comments.

*Millies45* · 12-21-2003, 08:09 PM

Here is another shot.

*Izmal* · 12-21-2003, 10:44 PM

:coolp: nice work...but try to play around with lighting..and add some bumps..keep it up.

wackter · 12-22-2003, 11:53 AM

You're right about the texturing. Izmal is right about the lighting. At this moment it looks too unrealistic. I think that if you updated the textures and lighting, the realism increases a lot.

*Millies45* · 12-22-2003, 03:37 PM

Thanks for the suggestions, much appreciated. I will post some more pics when i have fixed it up.

DVeditor · 12-26-2003, 06:28 AM

Nice - I'd play with the lighting a bit and add some "grunge" to the textures and I'd say you have a nice scene going! Good job!

Later.

12-21-2003, 08:07 PM	#1 (permalink)
Millies45 Forum Moderator View My Portfolio Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: SA - Jo'burg Age: 28 Posts: 818 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Rep Power: 6	Work in progress This is a scene i am working on for my short story. This is a very early render of my scene. It is still not textured properley. I welcome any comments. __________________

12-21-2003, 08:09 PM	#2 (permalink)
Millies45 Forum Moderator View My Portfolio Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: SA - Jo'burg Age: 28 Posts: 818 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Rep Power: 6	Here is another shot. __________________

12-22-2003, 03:37 PM	#5 (permalink)
Millies45 Forum Moderator View My Portfolio Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: SA - Jo'burg Age: 28 Posts: 818 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Rep Power: 6	Thanks for the suggestions, much appreciated. I will post some more pics when i have fixed it up. __________________

12-26-2003, 06:28 AM	#6 (permalink)
DVeditor Geekiness Extremeous View My Portfolio Join Date: May 2003 Location: Nebraska Age: 23 Posts: 305 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Rep Power: 6	Nice - I'd play with the lighting a bit and add some "grunge" to the textures and I'd say you have a nice scene going! Good job! Later. __________________ - CK Hicks - My Website deviantART Gallery

12-21-2003, 10:44 PM	#3 (permalink)
Izmal Forum Moderator View My Portfolio Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: Kuala Lumpur, Malaysia Posts: 645 Thanks: 1 Thanked 4 Times in 3 Posts Rep Power: 6	:coolp: nice work...but try to play around with lighting..and add some bumps..keep it up.

12-22-2003, 11:53 AM	#4 (permalink)
wackter MBO Technique Student View My Portfolio Join Date: Mar 2003 Age: 23 Posts: 377 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Rep Power: 6	You're right about the texturing. Izmal is right about the lighting. At this moment it looks too unrealistic. I think that if you updated the textures and lighting, the realism increases a lot.

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