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Old 05-09-2005, 07:17 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Talking Spanish Cafe Scene

Hey guys, here is another scene I am working on in 3dsmax. It's a Spanish Cafe scene and I have been working on it for several weeks on and off. Anyways, here is the last update of the scene (I would post all the first renders and stuff, but I would just be wasting server space lol.) Comments please! :D

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Old 05-09-2005, 11:08 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Nice render, but I think that it have to be thicker table and chairs legs.
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Old 05-09-2005, 09:30 PM   #3 (permalink)
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hi neck, nice render i would say, but table cloth looks ... mmm... separated (hope i use the right word) from the scene, maybe the texture is not sharp enough, or maybe bcos there exist thick black line surrounding the cloth.

anyway , this is not final render right, hope 2 c final soon.
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Old 05-10-2005, 11:44 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Very nice. :coolp:
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Old 05-11-2005, 08:04 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Thanks for the comments guys! I am working on the cloth some more. I may change the cloth texture also. Should it be changed? And if so, should it be somewhat transparent (around 75% opacity) and what table should it be on? Here is the same render with some Photoshop post-work added to the image. I think it's a little too blurry in my opinion:



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Old 05-12-2005, 08:37 AM   #6 (permalink)
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This variant look better than another.
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hey, i like this one :thumbsup: :bouncy:
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Old 05-13-2005, 04:13 PM   #8 (permalink)
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Thanks for the comments guys! What do you think I should add to the scene? I was thinking about adding a vase with a small plant or something near the wall. And maybe a couple other things. Any ideas? Thanks! :D
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I think you can add a vase with flowers on the front table.
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hi, should i say - things used to be placed and ready on the table like spoon, fork, ashtray, small glass vase with flower etc.
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Old 05-16-2005, 03:44 AM   #11 (permalink)
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Hmmm... I think the first render is better... You should work with the leaves [they are to flat I think]... ;]
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Ok here is a quick update to my Spanish Cafe Scene. I updated the cloth texture, added a wine bottle to the front table, and added an ashtray to the back table. I will update the ground (because the textures on it looks like crap) add a vase with a plant in it somewhere on the ground next to the walls, and add some stuff to the tables. I know the leaves look even worse now, I didn't realize they would look so offset when I barely moved them to the surface of the ground. They have noise modifyers though. Maybe I should detach them all so that it isn't just one object and I would have complete control of each leaf...Comments please! :D

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Here is the same render just with alot of Photoshop post-production work added to it. I know it looks really weird, I just wanted to try something out. Comments please!

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Old 05-17-2005, 03:21 PM   #14 (permalink)
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Necksmasher!!! Nice work man, I like it alot. I like the PS effect to it, very nice indeed :) Keep it up :)
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Old 05-18-2005, 09:46 AM   #15 (permalink)
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Yep, looks really good.. keep up the great work..

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