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Old 04-23-2006, 10:23 PM   #1 (permalink)
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hi everybody, posting this thread to ask for some advices, hoping u ppl generous enough to give.

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this is model render with volume light


scene is done in 3D Studio max. my problem is to improve the lighting (volumen light render) in the scene, i feel the lighting looks unnatural . i intend to create a scene where light comes from the back casting some shadow in front just like the one u c.

i use one target direct light, targeting the model from the back, and one omni light from the front. the scene is render using mental ray with GI and final gather. should i add more light? should i use photometric light (i use normal light in this scene)

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Old 04-24-2006, 09:40 AM   #2 (permalink)
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It looks cool. and the moddel have clean nice details.
and from my eyes the light looks cool and the dust and light from the eye ;) cool man
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Old 04-25-2006, 12:59 AM   #3 (permalink)
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hi minimus, thanks 4 comment. glad u like the render.
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Old 04-25-2006, 11:08 PM   #4 (permalink)
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hi there , anybody got any idea to further improve it. thanks :idea2:
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Old 05-07-2006, 09:33 PM   #5 (permalink)
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hi everybody, here's some update , add 1 more spotlight and change a bit of camera angle



and still feel something is missing, so i add space image as background, as this



would like to hear some comment, before and after the composition, thanks
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ok, let's c what's the update, change of camera angle and shift robot to right side of the composition.



and some try on composition, u like this?



how about this? comments? :bouncy:

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the one in the middle is the best
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hi, a bit update , add a bigger robot, though not 100% finish, still adjusting it's outlook, would like to hear comment on it. TQ :yaya:

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after many many trial and error, satisfy with this render at this stage



what do u think? still need to add background by composition :p
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nice rendering previews you got here kengsing..the robot model is simpel yet nice.most of the shot are good..let see how the final looks like.keep us updated.good work.
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nice i realy like your work and all those awsome renders i love it ;)

keep us updatet ok.. ;)
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hi minimus and Izmal , sure will keep u updated. thanks :D
here's the update: with background and amended lighting highlight

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new update. this is original render of a more complete scene



and this one is after level and color balance adjustment :p



would like to hear comment pls, thank you. :bouncy:
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