need comments for the car!

[hungryleo]

hey guys.
i modeled the car..it should be peugeot 206 cc heheh!
i need comments ....about the car..anything. then i can add the materials!
thanx for help

[amin2001]

LooKS GooD
send a Wire Frame without Smooth
and a Clay render
So i can help you on

[hungryleo]

hey...as you can see i have problem with my screen card...its almost dead!! so you gonna see alot of scratches on the scene. also what you mean clay render? i captured what i can see it with wires......
hope that helps!
thanx in advance

[amin2001]

Hemmmm
you can check out my mitsubishi Wip , i have some clay pictures there
you got lots of polygons there !! did you model it using box or smth ?
tell me about your skill ! i think its your First or 2Nd Car , Right ?

the wire frame is hard to understand
if you send a clay is better , to make caly : select all objects and apply an empty material Slot to them

there were some probs i saw in your pictures
i have marked them , try to refine them

and how long did this Toook you ??

Try to fix those problems

Keep it up

[hungryleo]

hey man..i realy thank you for this..now i can see my mistakes......
gonna send the clay one after i figured out what that means!!!
i modeled it wwith smth..my skill still beginner.....only in my free time!
and its my 4 or 5 car. took me along time...i realy donot look at the time!
gonna refine the problems and send it back with the clay render!!
thx

[amin2001]

Nice Car anyway
fix those problems
keep it up

[hungryleo]

so i finished fixing these problems.....the problem near the logo on front shoud be like that as i saw in the picture. so i have here the clay render without smooth thing...
but what that for? isnot better to look at the smooth one?

[amin2001]

i told you
The Wire frame Without smooth
send the clay withsmooth :-P
but i will also take a look at this one
but send them with smooth as well

[hungryleo]

well..here is the smoothed one!

[amin2001]

Well , the car looks Clean now , i dont see much problems ,
there is only some moving vertex thing

always aply a empty slot to your object
you can see it more clean !!
after these problms , i think you should start texturing or material , whatever you have decided

[hungryleo]

great....thanx,,i think gonna start working on the matterials...and reflections.i think its more difficult now! i still donot get what you mean: wire without smooth. can you show me example? i usenurmbs subdivison to make it smooth!also about the problems: iam not focusing much on the interior now....can you give me hints howw to fix the exterior problem....here is the wire without smooth. as you can see there is alot of edges there...cause i need them for hole i made....cannot have another way..only to copnvert the object to boolean and pick acalynder to make the hole. well..if you have another idea so it will help me alot.also the back small light

[amin2001]

Well, doing it with boolean, will have a lot of edges there , myself for making such holes,i use CUT , then i delete those polygons,and extrude the edgs , and thats how i make the holes !!
by unsmoothed wire,i mean send the wireframe , before adding smooth modifier , such as turbosmooth,meshsmooth

[amin2001]

for those problems you have 2 way
first way which is the best,model the holes using cut

the other way is playing with vertexes untill you solve the problem

my idea is to do the first way
cuz you will have a better result

as you can see the are some problms which will not happen if you use cut

[hungryleo]

i used both ways to creat holes.....the CUT ...but stil got problems to make the right shape!!anyway..iam starting with the rendering now....hope my materilas will cover these things.i have amillion of things to test....wheels...body....gonna take along time..
well thanx for help and hopfully gonna post more to get comments!
cheers

[amin2001]

Use a Dark car paint , such as Black , Cuz it will Cover your Problems ,

Keep it up