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Old 04-15-2009, 06:16 AM   #1 (permalink)
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I'm creating a monster.
Later i want to animate it.
Well was a bit confused about loops!
Can anyone tell me about my loops.
i m really worried about skinning.
(underarms portion)
Heres a wireframe jpeg.
Plz gimme some tips!!!
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Old 04-15-2009, 03:44 PM   #2 (permalink)
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hmmm...
loops are not so bad, man
but proposrtions and whole appearance of this character is really monstrous
if you plan to make this one a human character, go to zbrush and fix shapes and proportions.
In general... try to keep as many quads as possible, if you cannot do that, make tris or pentas. other polygons are not "allowed".

thus, i noticed som mess with mesh under chest area. it look really weird.
you should google some anatomical pictures that show you flow of muscles.

oh i almost forgot... belly got one log muscle. its divided to 4 parts vertically. upper part is held on lower ribs and lower part goes straight to groin... so you should not end lower part like this, but it should go continuosly to the "sacred area"

Hope, i helped a bit
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Thanks For The Suggestion! I'll look forward to the changes....
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It seems like you have a tendency to want to focus on the muscular detail before getting the form down. Work out the form and proportions first.
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