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Old 08-29-2007, 09:41 PM   #1 (permalink)
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hi ı'm safak ,from turkey ı new max user

this my second car model



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Old 08-30-2007, 12:29 PM   #2 (permalink)
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ey the car looks nice :) but i think you could have improved the material and render a bunch becaus that will really make a big difference on the car :)
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Old 08-30-2007, 12:46 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Priority state want, age 14

On me like you think material about but I am working on modeling

After that , I will pass to the material

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Old 08-30-2007, 10:41 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Although there is a shape of the Mini Cooper, but some parts are not 'flat' (modelling problem). Did you model according to a blueprint? Other than that, the lights should have the 'cover', from what I can see, there isn't any cover for the lights. You also need to use 'better materials', some materials are too 'fake', for example, the windows looks like black colour clay.

For your information, age will not affect the 'quality' of your work.

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Old 08-31-2007, 03:27 AM   #5 (permalink)
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thanks

Yes, blueprint with do

I started to new model , it finish , I put the picture

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