kitchen

[saifkhan_234]

hi i m submiting my work after a long time hope you will like it, it is not completed yet but i will try to finish it soon
comments are welcome so plz comment

[tig3r_3D]

nice work u've got there my friend...keep it aup...;)

[saifkhan_234]

yaar nobody is giving me a comment atleast plz give the comment wheather it is good or bad

[hungryleo]

hey..ice work there..but ofcourse the materials of some objects isnot good enough. for the aluminum isnot looks like alum...i think you forgot to add reflections for the glass also..oven window, microwave.also the roof..should it be dark?looks unormal to me..wwhite is ok.iam talking also on the corners...too dark. the cups also needs some reflections . well...
good modeling anyway...make it real with the reflections!
keep it up. and post the new one :)

[saifkhan_234]

thanks god atleast some one has given his comments. well hungryleo i have applied the reflection but i dont know why it is not coming, u mean microwave should be dark.
and thanks again for your comment. i will try to do the rest of the things

[hungryleo]

well some details will help me to give you some comments what to do.....which renderer your using?i use only vray...hope that also for you.. so i can give some tips if there is!

[saifkhan_234]

well hungryleo im also using vray with max 9, i think it is the best renderer for interiors.

[hungryleo]

well...for the walls i guess you should increase there GI amount..so there will be more brighter. you can do it by going to vray proporties.
also as i can see you used some kind of light but its directed upward, there is alot of shadows there...the light should be downwards...meybe you can exclude the opjects from casting shadows, or replace the light with vrayhdri to light up the whole scene,but still need alight only for shadows and not illumination!also i can see the cups are not corectly has there own color on two pictures...one is dark( never saw acup lick that) the other is overbrighted! again...use hdri for reflection.you can add reflection for the oven....it should be reflective.its from steal no? well...your modelling is great, just focus now on lighting. belive me its also much more harder than modeling!
keep it up.

[saifkhan_234]

well hungryleo thanks for giving me the advise i willl try my level best in lighting but plz tell me how to use vray hrdi

[hungryleo]

sure.......here: http://www.aversis.be/extra_tutorials/vray_hdri.htm
good luck. any more things your welcom

[saifkhan_234]

thanks man

[tmch]

nic work

[asd1asd]

v.good keep it up mate