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Old 05-31-2004, 02:56 AM   #1 (permalink)
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house scene

this is a house interior scene i'm making, its made with 3ds max 5 and rendered using radiosity, what do you think of it?
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Old 05-31-2004, 07:33 AM   #2 (permalink)
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omg, hi carlos good to see you here too
damn that;s a great scene man. the radiosity worked too. you should really continue in this architectual tsuff it really looks great
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Old 05-31-2004, 08:24 AM   #3 (permalink)
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hey, yep it looks nice, just some suggestions.

I know it's early to start texturing, so I guess the floor would be better later anyway.
Also, there are some strange shadows around the upper part of right wall, at ceiling ...looks as if ceiling is floating, so check the model mesh.

All in all, very nice, looking forward for more pics
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yeah you're right, i think thats because of the lighting
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Old 05-31-2004, 06:35 PM   #5 (permalink)
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thanks for the comments

here's an update, i put a glass tube, inside of it i'll put some plants, what do you think of it?
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here's the pic

what do you think of it?
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looks really cool, i like the glass tube, although its a bit empty ;)
hmm dunno about the plants. it would look cool but a bit outta place

keep up the cool work man
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Yep, looks good so far..
Not sure about the plants either, but for what will the interior be used?? Gallery, or some entrance hall.. so maybe you put some lights and a sculpture there...

Or, maybe you make a dance club, with a glass cage dancer??
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Keep it up, and post regularly..
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I like the design, but the lighting needs some work. First the floor is way to reflective, turn it down a little. and for the shadows on the celiing, make sure the walls and celing intersect a little and try increasing the radiosity quality to make the shadows a little smoother. oh one more thing, i dont see any shadows from the sun and sky, turn them on and it will add a lot of realism.

keep up the good modeling, I'd like to see the finished design.
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Old 06-02-2004, 04:20 PM   #10 (permalink)
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Looks great!! Keep it up!!
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here's an update

i added a tree
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looks cool man, the material at the bottom can be improved
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here's an update

i added some couches, and some tables, what do you think of it?
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coming along really nice, keep up good work.

try positioning the tube in the center of that area looks like its out of place & the sculpture like someone said my go in there better then the plant just doesnt look right.
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