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Old 03-29-2006, 09:35 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Chain and Wall

I've made this to test the 3D Studio Max's physics and... myself. It's about a chain hanging on a wall, from which 3 bricks will be exposed to an external power... The animation (12 sec) is ready, I need only to put some sound effects on it.
I appreciate any thoughts about this...
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Old 03-29-2006, 09:39 AM   #2 (permalink)
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ye looks good. do you have dust on the animation?
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Yes, I have dust. Lots of it... :)
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realy nice ;) you up load the animation?
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Old 03-30-2006, 04:36 AM   #5 (permalink)
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I don't know if I can upload a movie to this site, but I surely put it up on my website and place here a link... when I finish it.
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ye do that ;) cant wait
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Nice work on the lighting, but it looks low-res. Work some more on the texturing, the bump seems a little high. Other than those things I really like it :D
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I fixed the bump map, it looks much realistic now... at least I hope :)
The pictures look low res just because they're only screenshots from the movie that is already compressed.
I was almost finishing the sound effects, now I have to render the movie again... cca 15 hours... so what? No problem if the result gets better, isn't it? In the week end I think, I'll post a link to the finished movie.
Thanks to all for the tips and nice words! :p
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Old 04-02-2006, 04:55 PM   #9 (permalink)
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Here are some shots from the new version. It took me 16 hours to render...
This time I made it a little longer (14 secs) Soon it will be downloadable.
Any words are more than welcome :) Thanks in advance!
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did the animation or the pic rendering take 16 hours :P?
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:) The pictures are only screenshots... Thanks for asking :)
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The screenshots look's realy nice ;) cant wait to see the "movie"
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Here's the movie: Chain & Wall.
Please, DO comment! Thanks!
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