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Old 04-29-2003, 01:04 PM   #16 (permalink)
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The scene looks amazing... really "7th Guest" like!! As far as improving it, I would add some volume light coming from the broken door, break the wallpaper a bit (some small tears would be enough...) and maybe a crack in the lamp and it's shade... and maybe add some ambient light... the image is too dark and the detailes are lost by the lack of light.
One more thing, I would widen the camera angle just a bit, to broaden the image...
Other than that, excellent work Nsert...
good luck!!
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Old 04-29-2003, 02:48 PM   #17 (permalink)
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After i finish modeling i'll add the volumetric lights, glows and maybe fog.
Yes, I make my own textures.
The cans, newspapers and pizza box would make the scene look messy.You won't see that in twilight zone, poltergheist or other movies like that.Your ideas are good but they don't work with what i'm trying to create.
Pyros and the others bear with me...I also have some games to finish and another project in progress (you'll see it soon enough).Thanks for the cheers!

-The higher detailed texture will be posted tomorrow because today MAX keeps crushing
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Old 04-29-2003, 03:00 PM   #18 (permalink)
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No improvements but saved at higher quality
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Old 04-29-2003, 03:04 PM   #19 (permalink)
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Don't know why the uploaded image is darker and more blury:mad14:
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