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Old 01-12-2004, 08:01 PM   #1 (permalink)
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bridge test

my first render with brazil, modeled with rhino 2, I just need some comments
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it is nice. you got nice shodows but it is too bright but good work
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a elevator shaft?

it looks like GI but i cant tell what it is
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Old 01-15-2004, 07:16 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Well something should be in the end, while it is to rought to be a bridge to heaven...
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try to make it much more perspective..more dynamic look!keep up the good work...:thumbsup:
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Old 01-16-2004, 07:12 PM   #6 (permalink)
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nice shadows and textures
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hey hey

thanks to all I've tried another render with less shadows but better materials (I think...)
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second test lighting

there is still no background, sorry....:)
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more model

Hey nice lighting, i would make the barrier in the middle more complex and also i am having a hard time with the scale. Try putting in an object for size reference. And maybe a side guard.
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hey hey

you're right, it will be done soon, it's part of the project
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