animal modeling/horse

[the eye]

i hardly see any differences . but i think the neck is a bit too long and too tight at the end , which makes the head look smaller. at least this is the way i see it. i think you have a good render though. maybe the black environment does not come as an advantage. nice work

[WilD-AL]

it is right ...

But it also is consciously done ...


but thanks for feedback

[WilD-AL]

[WilD-AL]

how do you like the pose ?

[Honzik]

WoW!!! Man this is so great work! It's one of the best i have seen! And ybout the pose i dunno i would rather use something more dynamic, it's ofcourse your call, but that's my opinion...maybe something like the image atached or something similar, otherwise it's really great!

http://img696.imageshack.us/i/runninghorse.jpg/

[milki]

it's amazing!
but i think, that fur on this horse is too soft and long
you know... its more like teddy bear
but horses have tight and relatively short hair
so guess you need to change the thickness of fur to more thick on ends, shorten a bit and give it litlle more specular power.
But still... great work

[WilD-AL]

thank you very much ...



i,m working currently on the pose...but I will improve the hair...


Your Feedback Is Always Welcome

[WilD-AL]

hello everybody ... how do you like the pose

[WilD-AL]

the ground will be of course refined ...just the first tests

[milki]

you want this horse to sprint very dynamically or just run-to-walk?
if sprint, you should give him more dynamics
like here
http://www.racingwrite.com/images/apache-cat11.jpg
so if you want him to be caught in the moment of touching his back legs with ground, ti will probably have front legs straightened and heading forwards.
if in air, the rear and front legs should cross each other
and if front touching ground the reare are heading under body
(other poses are similar)
and dont forget to adjust height of head according to phase of run cycle (google. got plenty of photos )
in your picture it looks like he jst jumped of all four legs in one moment.
so maybe its touhg critique, but i'm just trying to give you some hint to make him more dynamic and agressive and less cartoon happy

hope it helped

btw, how you did this ground, look fine for starters.

[WilD-AL]

i want to sprint very dynamically....has to look carefully...
for helpful pictures


but thanks very good feedback...



P.s: the ground was made with realflow