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Old 04-03-2011, 06:13 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Advanced mech WiP

yo guys

I've started on this detailed mech character and I just want your take on what I could improve or add / take away.

For now I've rendered out a clay and added a bit of glow to the chest (some kind of energy source with a hexagon shielding)

I feel I've got the pose right but I'am unsure about adding a head was leaning towards a cockpit sort of thing not entirely sure.

Also maybe adding more geometry to the left leg, looks like too much negative space.

thanks for any comments you may have.

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