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Old 12-02-2008, 07:42 AM   #1 (permalink)
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hello every1,
working on a short project of animation demoreel. this is 1 of the backgrounds for my project...
plz post ur comments on lighting n texturing in the scene...so i can improove it further.

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Old 12-03-2008, 03:57 AM   #2 (permalink)
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I can't see anything!!! Too much dark.
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Old 12-04-2008, 02:36 PM   #3 (permalink)
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i like the texture on tha wall very nice.
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Old 12-09-2008, 06:05 AM   #4 (permalink)
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thnx 4 ur replies

thnx guyz 4 ur valuable comments n suugestions...
adding the same scene with sum lighting changes...hope u'll comment on it too...
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Old 12-09-2008, 01:06 PM   #5 (permalink)
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dude, show some sources ov light in the scene...nt just add lights, but evn model sumthins, lyk lamp posts or ceiling lights etc. n add lights to dem....the textures r awesome....lights need a bit ov work.....do Global Illumination...it'll enhance the scene hugely :)
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i like the lighting better than when it was all red. but as shashanks said i would still work on it a little. but i like the textures they look pretty good.
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to shashanks18>>>
yup, i have not added any sourse of light...i'll surely make the favourable changes in the scene...thnx bro, 4 ur help!

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Old 12-10-2008, 01:28 AM   #8 (permalink)
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i will surely work on the lighting in the same scene...
thanks dude, for your help!

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Old 12-15-2008, 12:12 PM   #9 (permalink)
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good going man...
same here...i like texture job...make it more brighter...



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