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Old 12-09-2008, 06:41 AM   #1 (permalink)
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hello every1,
working on a short project of animation demoreel. this is 1 of the backgrounds for my project...
plz post ur comments on lighting n texturing in the scene...so i can improove it further.

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Old 12-09-2008, 10:06 AM   #2 (permalink)
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looks good i like your style a little bit brighter but still so orange & i think it 'will be good//...\\
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i would brighten it up a little on the stage. but still leaving the offstage part darker.(just my opnion) other than that it looks pretty good
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Old 12-16-2008, 09:19 AM   #4 (permalink)
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hi atul. the image looks ok , its a very nive light in there though you cold have used a more intense light just for some areas , like the stage. The stage look a bit wierd becouse of the texture. Try using UWmapping in 3ds max, it will help you fit your map in a real scale size. And try adding more details. Thats all. See ya
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thank you friend, for your suggestions...
i will definately try to improve same scene keeping in mind your advice!
thanx again
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