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Old 12-16-2008, 10:35 AM   #1 (permalink)
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hello frndz,
thnx a lot for your responce in my all previous posts...it really helps!

this time i have cum up with an idea of countryside house...plz check out the texturing work and comment on it.

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Old 12-16-2008, 12:11 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Look at this. Your first mistake.
Wrong proportion!!! Your house much smaller than trees!
Second, as i see, you didn't use HRDI for lighting or use wrong settings for hdr.
Don't USE straight lines. Try to bend some deteils, for exapmple roof. Look at the my image (house), i din't use straight lines. all my surfase a little bit bending. Of course, you have wrong bump and diffuse map but it's not important it's a buisness of expiriance. Keep several importan ways.
1. right proportion
2. right lighting
3. right composition
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hey mike,
thanks a lot for your advice, this will definately help me in the future...
however, in the above work i have done only texturing n lighting and not modelling as this is my institute's project....
next time, if i will model sumthing for BG, i will definately consider your tips!

thank you for the help and sorry for the mistakes...
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ok so,
u wrote u focus only on lightning and texturing, but important r every 3 parts.
Modeling: nice detailed model with no textures sometimes looks better than with it. Try to model more details. Dont worry about using more seperate objects. For example roof. If u use 20-30 modeled boxes, it would be better. Next thing is, dont use bg picture everywhere. Model ground with some trees.
texturing: Good texturing needs nice detailed model :). More bump, it wont looks so flat.
lightning: I prefere HDRI maps with Vray light. It always looks cool.

Keep going and trying. U r better every day :)

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thanks friend,
i will keep these all things in mind while working on my next project...
thanks a lot, it really helps!

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that wasn't me that helped that was Dr. D. i don't know that much. i'm still a beginner as well as you.

My name is Mike :). Many people from this forum knows me as Mike.
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