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Old 01-18-2009, 02:20 AM   #1 (permalink)
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First attempt at making a serious interior scene.
Yes i see the unsightly seem in the corner to late to fix it oh-well i guess

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Old 01-18-2009, 02:26 AM   #2 (permalink)
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very good model, but much better light work is needed. looks good
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very good model, but much better light work is needed. looks good
yeh ive noticed lighting kinda makes or breaks scenes more than most other elements. What should i do differently?
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nice scene. IMO the light by the door seems kinda bright and may be helping throw it off a bit.
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