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| Maya novice Join Date: Dec 2006 Age: 18
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Rep Power: 0 ![]() | hey, it looks really good. In the top left corner it looks like the building is jutting out from the ground abit. hmm. this is just my opinion but i think it would look cool as a dusk scene goo luck |
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Rep Power: 0 ![]() | Youre right about the house but i just made some low poly models to get a hang of the scale. I need to work on a spectacular lighting, dusk will look good indeed, but i have little experience. |
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Rep Power: 0 ![]() | well it's hard to see that it's a waterfall, the idea is cool but it needs some work, it ends very abruptly near the top, maybe blur that a bit, but one thing you should certainly add is some 'fog' or particles where the falls hit the water, that would increase realism a lot i think. take a look at this image to see what i mean: |
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| I really like the depth put into this..its a really good idea but the textures on the rocks need to be a bit more rockish..that look too plain..they were looking better on previous renders but this last one didnt look that good...I dont know maybe its the green.. |