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*Dr. D* · 12-16-2008, 12:11 PM

Look at this. Your first mistake.
Wrong proportion!!! Your house much smaller than trees!
Second, as i see, you didn't use HRDI for lighting or use wrong settings for hdr.
Don't USE straight lines. Try to bend some deteils, for exapmple roof. Look at the my image (house), i din't use straight lines. all my surfase a little bit bending. Of course, you have wrong bump and diffuse map but it's not important it's a buisness of expiriance. Keep several importan ways.
1. right proportion
2. right lighting
3. right composition

12-16-2008, 12:11 PM	#2 (permalink)
Dr. D 3dm3 moderator View My Portfolio Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: Ukraine, Kiev Age: 27 Posts: 619 Thanks: 32 Thanked 57 Times in 57 Posts Rep Power: 4	Look at this. Your first mistake. Wrong proportion!!! Your house much smaller than trees! Second, as i see, you didn't use HRDI for lighting or use wrong settings for hdr. Don't USE straight lines. Try to bend some deteils, for exapmple roof. Look at the my image (house), i din't use straight lines. all my surfase a little bit bending. Of course, you have wrong bump and diffuse map but it's not important it's a buisness of expiriance. Keep several importan ways. 1. right proportion 2. right lighting 3. right composition Attached Thumbnails __________________ Sorry for the mistakes :) Last edited by Dr. D; 12-16-2008 at 12:13 PM..