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Old 03-12-2008, 12:36 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Very well done - I have nothing but admiration for anyone who can focus for 18 months! I thought it was very atmospheric, and the pacing is just right.

The only thing I found slightly jarring is when she stands up from the bed (about 3 minutes in) as the weight seems wrong. I think she either needs to push her upper body further forward or pull her feet back under her.

But in general I agree with Simovici - you keep the viewers' interest throughout the whole thing and that's hugely important.
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