| yea - here's a sugestion
either follow the Creating the planet tutorial or do it in Photoshop ( google it, i found it and made it)
your planet and lightning is,...well...terrible ;)
do the scene in photoshop,import that in Max,do a planet with textures in Max,build a detailed ship in Max, then import that in Photoshop and add some effects if you don't know how to render
but if you don't have photoshop...hmmm...ignore this post
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